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Posted by malthus on August 22, 2004, at 0:00:39
For a gaze, a world;
for a smile, a paradise;
for a kiss...I don't know
what I could give you for a kiss!
Posted by Atticus on August 22, 2004, at 4:24:51
In reply to To him. I don't know..., posted by malthus on August 22, 2004, at 0:00:39
Well, it's nice to see that your pain over your lost relationship hasn't snuffed out the romantic that clearly lurks within, still. It's not hard to see why your heart was broken so badly. This poem really made me smile and kind of sigh; it brought back what it has felt like when I'm first starting to fall in love with someone. Atticus, wearing his heart on his sleeve, as usual
Posted by malthus on August 22, 2004, at 4:59:33
In reply to Re: To him. I don't know... » malthus, posted by Atticus on August 22, 2004, at 4:24:51
Hi Atticus:
I do experience pain and pleasure when I think about that relationship. There's clearly more pain but I'm happy I made you smile and sigh. It's been a long time since I've felt the carefree lightheartedness you speak of when you first fall in love with someone (the best "drug" out there, but oh so rare) ;-) Malthus-the insomniac wearing her heart on her pajama sleeve
Posted by Jai Narayan on August 22, 2004, at 8:40:43
In reply to Re: To him. I don't know... » Atticus, posted by malthus on August 22, 2004, at 4:59:33
Lovely poem, light and lyrical. Does have the fairy dust of love hanging about..
Jai Narayan with toast crumbs all over my pajama sleeve as I sleepily wipe my lips while reading writing-babble
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